Wednesday, 25 March 2009

Haiku Revisited!

Haiku - Unrhymed Japanese poetic form consisting of 17 syllables arranged in three lines containing five, seven, and five syllables, respectively.

Sunlight, mirror, cat.
Prances, dances, advances.
Whiskers twitch, pounces.




Sleepless night thinking
haiku's a load of twaddle
doesn't even rhyme!

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5 comments:

  1. DavidThursday, March 26, 2009 1:04:00 am

    The first one is great, because you have a semi rhyme on the last words of lines two and three which is cute.

    The last one made me laugh... but it wasn't really up to par ;)

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  2. CATachresisThursday, March 26, 2009 4:34:00 pm

    I will try harder :P

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  3. DavidFriday, March 27, 2009 10:21:00 am

    "Carolyn has much potential, but will always be distracted from her work by silly behaviour and an ingnorant attitude of what work really is. Can do better"

    ;)

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  4. CATachresisFriday, March 27, 2009 8:36:00 pm

    "ingnorant"? :PP

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  5. DavidSunday, March 29, 2009 12:58:00 am

    *claps*

    Promoted to set 1 English for spotting the accidental deliverate mistache!

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