The first one is great, because you have a semi rhyme on the last words of lines two and three which is cute.The last one made me laugh... but it wasn't really up to par ;)
I will try harder :P
"Carolyn has much potential, but will always be distracted from her work by silly behaviour and an ingnorant attitude of what work really is. Can do better";)
*claps*Promoted to set 1 English for spotting the accidental deliverate mistache!
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